Report Card Day

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Another erotic story from the FLOGMASTER!

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*** AUTHOR'S NOTE ***
My previous TV Commercial, Buns of Steel, received tons of acclaim and requests for more. So here's another one!

Frank
***

                      Report Card Day
                       Script by F.M.
                TV Commercial for Moco Jeans

FADE IN:

INT. BRUNETTE'S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM DAY

Teenage BRUNETTE eating breakfast with MOM, DAD, and LITTLE BROTHER.

MOM Say, isn't today Report Card Day?

Brunette gulps in fear.

MOM (cont'd) (to Brunette) I hope you did better than last time, young lady!

BRUNETTE (to herself) I've got to go shopping!

INT. DEPARTMENT STORE DAY

A crowd of dozens of panicked teenage girls fight over a display of Moco Jeans. Harried clerks run every which way, vainly attempting to stop the madness.

REDHEAD (tugging jeans away from Brunette) Let go! I've GOT to have a pair of Moco Jeans!

BRUNETTE These are mine!

SALESCLERK #1 Please stay calm everyone!

SALESCLERK #2 There are plenty of Moco Jeans for everyone who wants a pair!

SALESCLERK #1 (to Salesclerk #2) I've never seen such a run on jeans!

SALESCLERK #2 These aren't just jeans... these are Moco Jeans. And today isn't just any day... it's Report Card Day!

Salesclerk #1 suddenly comprehends.

INT. BRUNETTE'S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM DAY

CLOSE ON Moco Jeans logo on round butt of Brunette.

As we pull back, we see Brunette is bent over the back of the sofa. Her Dad stands behind her, ready to swing a big wooden paddle.

MOM (reading report card) And a 'C' in English. That's terrible!

Brunette grimaces as the paddle slams into her ass several times. She grins and winks at the CAMERA.

BRUNETTE I'm one of the lucky ones... I managed to get a new pair of Moco Jeans!

CLOSE ON Brunette's butt being paddled.

EXT. SUBURBAN NEIGHBORHOOD NIGHT

We pull away from Brunette's butt and we are looking at her through the picture window of her home.

We quickly pan along the road and in the main picture window of every home is a teenage girl bent over a sofa, with a paddle-wielding parent. The whacking sound of dozens of paddles across teenage bottoms and the cries of young ladies resounds.

ANNOUNCER (V.O.) Moco Jeans. When a tough pair of jeans REALLY counts.

FADE OUT TO CHEEKY MOCO JEANS LOGO:

The End

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